wake2000

That sounds okay to me, but it sounds somewhat resume-vague. I think I know a lot about risk, but I don't know what "general ledger and non-general ledger portfolio risks" are. I think that the person reading this didn't know what you were talking about so he just thought you were blowing smoke. I think something like "devised hedging strategies using interest rate options to defray these risks" would beat bloody hell out of "identified appropriate responses to reduce these risks". If you describe your job more completely does iy fit better or worse?